Binky paper

[tundrakatiebean]

Here is my next english paper, definition of a binky it's supposed to be a paragraph long.





One of the most reassuring, amusing, and heart-warming moments in the ownership of a pet rabbit is their first binky. A binky is one of many ways a rabbit communicates with its owners or companions. Binkies usually consist of a rabbit jumping up in the air while shaking its head and twisting its body before landing. This is the biggest and most obvious expression of joy in a rabbit’s physical communication. Often first time rabbit owners are confused and concerned when seeking a binky for the first time, often commenting that their rabbits are ‘spazzing out’ or ‘seizuring in mid-air.’ Once a rabbit’s owner understands what a binky is, they can enjoy viewing their rabbit’s confession of glee.

 

[MaevePotter]

aww.. very cute!! good definition.

 

[undergunfire]

I love it !

 

[maherwoman]

That's a PERFECT definition!

 

[SnowyShiloh]

Great!! However, I'm pretty sure that it should be "seizing in mid-air". Just pointing it out since it's for an English class! :biggrin2:

 

[tundrakatiebean]

Thanks guys :biggrin2:



Shiloh, I did mean seizuring as in to have a seizure

 

[Bo B Bunny]

Very good!

 

[~BunBuns~]

wow!!:shock: good definition.:biggrin2:

 

[SnowyShiloh]

Hi Katie! "Seizuring" isn't technically a word. It's not in the dictionary (you can check out dictionary.com if you want to see for yourself). If someone is having a seizure, they are seizing, not seizuring. I know it sounds weird, but English is crazy sometimes! I just wanted to point it out since it's for an English class. Other than that, I think your definition is spot on! Will you post the whole paper for us to read? :dude:

 

[aurora369]

I really like it too!

Just another word mix up. It should be seeing and not seeking in the second to last sentence.

--Dawn

 

[tundrakatiebean]

Thanks Shiloh, didin't realize that (neither did my mom the english minor ) And that IS the whole paper, it's only supposed to be a paragraph long

And Dawn, thank you! I didn't see that!

 

[Evey]

One of the most reassuring, amusing, and heart-warming moments in the ownership of a pet rabbit ishis/her first binky.

Once a rabbit’s owner understands what a binky is,he/she can enjoy viewinghis/her rabbit’s confession of glee.



Hello,

I would just also point out some pronoun problems Great definition!